Jun 21

A Small Dark Coffee Brown Leather Man Bag, Pouch, or Sling “They’ll Fight Over When You’re Dead”

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I love this bag. It is perfect for what I needed however I was offended to find that the owners felt the need to include a small printed ‘book of biblical verses’ in the bag. I really could have done with out that and seriously considered returning the product because of it. I’m glad they are happy in their religion, but please, don’t include me.

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May 31

A Chestnut Small Leather Wallet “They’ll Fight Over When You’re Dead”

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I wouyld love to try this product but I believe $8 for shipping is over priced. Deleted from cart.

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May 28

One Hen – How One Small Loan Made a Big Difference

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I too was disappointed after reading all the great reviews on Amazon, and then buying the book and finding out it is written in a stiff, passive style:

“Kojo tugs the knot tight and hoists a bundle of firewood onto his head… As Kojo nears the house he can small his mother’s fuju cooking, their main meal made from cassava and yams. He begins to walk faster.”

Why not make this a bit more active? It would have been easy:

“Kojo tugged the knot tight and hoisted the firewood onto his head… As Kojo neared his house, he could smell that his mother was cooking fuju, a meal made from yams and cassava. Kojo started walking faster.”

See, how hard was that?

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